This was by far visually appealing. This was cute while also be acceptable for any age group, something very hard to find. I can give this picture 5 stars for originality because I haven't seen many renditions of Primrose Everdeen's death. The technique was very good in my opinion, but I can't really give an in-depth analysis, because I have do not have art skills. I noticed that Katniss's eyes had a look of horror, i.e. it portrayed an emotion. Something I don't normally see with amateur drawings (by amateur, I mean not a print). This definitely impacted me, because I liked it enough to put it on my tumblr and include it in my group's gallery, as well as favourite it. Overall, I really like this piece.
thank you so so much for such a kind critique. And I'm so glad you like it enough to feature it in your club and on your tumblr!
You're absolutely right, there are not many renditions of this scene: here are some that I've found that you might enjoy: [link]
You might have already seen them, but I thought I'd try anyway.